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Smoking tobacco like other dangerous drugs should be made illegal. Agree or disagree?

抽烟应该和其它毒品一样被列入不合法物品,同意或不同意?

Smoking is emerging as a great threat to our society.It is implausible but true that in many countries smoking is not banned. I have no doubt in my mind that smoking should be banned with immediate effect. A few reasons to support my stance are,

First of all, almost every body knows the fact that "smoking is injurious to health" it can cause several deadly diseases: for example, various types of cancers, cardiac arrest etc. It is a general perception that every cigarette smoked can cut short life by five minutes.

Passive smoking is another good reason to make smoking illegal. Findings from recent studies reveals that passive smokers are at more risk as compared to active smokers, because their body is not willing to accept the smoke particles. Moreover, childern are the one who get affect most. To make my idea more clear let me illustrate, suppose in a family where mother and father both are active smokers and they smoke ten cigarettee each per day at home. In this case, the childern is automatically smoking five cigarette per day as a passive smoker. Which in turn posses a great risk to our forth coming generations.

After pondering over a great deal of thought and delibrations with myself I come to a conclusion that smoking should be banned and made illegal. i know that many people especially smokers might argue my opinion expressed, but in truth this is what we need to make our planet more healthier.

一共300字, 大家可以看看这篇9分作文

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Doug_Maniac 硕士二年级

拿不到九分吧

Dio 小学五年级

哪个位置拿不到9呢?

Doug_Maniac 硕士二年级

一些地方语法有问题。但是整篇文章的英语味很浓,写文章的人口语应该不错。

Dio 小学五年级

语法,小瑕疵没问题。毕竟就算你要一个土生土长的英国人,30分钟内写一个300字的讨论也会出错。

Dio 小学五年级

然后这篇哪里语法有问题? 我们来讨论下?

Doug_Maniac 硕士二年级
尖耳朵小兔纸 硕士二年级

make our planet more healther

这句确实有点不舒服,不是扯上环保吧。

尖耳朵小兔纸 硕士二年级
Dio 小学五年级

标点符号这里的确似有不妥

Dio 小学五年级

感谢大家看这篇文章看的这么仔细 :)

Doug_Maniac 硕士二年级

对啊,大部分都是标点或者单复数的问题,其他的都不错,所以写文章的人口语应该不错,但是在写作的时候就会曝露出一些问题了。

aimei999 高中一年级

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